Tuesday 26 June 2018
Sylvia Park
On Sunday me and my friend, went to Sylvia Park to watch a movie but there were no movies we liked to we just walked around and went to the food court and got butter chicken and a frozen coke. After we ate we were just walked around and went shopping. I had a very fun and funny day with my friend and I hope we get to go out again together.
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Greetings there Arizona,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed that you were having fun with your friend over at Sylvia Park.To good to know that you can have more friends than just friends at your school.
It was really cool knowing that you had a fun time with your friend and hoped to do it again together with her.
Maybe next time you could get if you sentences make sense and to also put more information like what you enjoyed,something you don't enjoy and other information.You could probably use some images to make your writing more creative and good looking for others to make it eye catching.
BUT GREAT JOB Just make sure to take my advice.
-ALETHEIA