Hello Arizona, I really like how you did steps on how to make dough.What I really think you should work on, is your recount description.What you've done, who were involved and y our ending.To improve on your learning, I think you could probaly work on it more to acheive this goal.Keep working hard Arizona and great JOB!.
Hello Arizona, I really like how you did steps on how to make dough.What I really think you should work on, is your recount description.What you've done, who were involved and y our ending.To improve on your learning, I think you could probaly work on it more to acheive this goal.Keep working hard Arizona and great JOB!.
Hi Arizona,I really like how you showed as how to make playdough.I really like the color it is very light and look cool.And I like how you did math.excellent work hope you had a good day bye.
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ReplyDeleteI really like how you did steps on how to make dough.What I really think you should work on, is your recount description.What you've done, who were involved and y our ending.To improve on your learning, I think you could probaly work on it more to acheive this goal.Keep working hard Arizona and great JOB!.
Hello Arizona,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you did steps on how to make dough.What I really think you should work on, is your recount description.What you've done, who were involved and y our ending.To improve on your learning, I think you could probaly work on it more to acheive this goal.Keep working hard Arizona and great JOB!.
Hi Arizona,I really like how you showed as how to make playdough.I really like the color it is very light and look cool.And I like how you did math.excellent work hope you had a good day bye.
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